What stood out to me as important from the feedback I recieved from my last elevator pitch was that I plan on incorporating others into my idea instead of accomplishing my goals on my own. Feedback I thoughout was useful was that once it works for apartment complexes, we need it to better school parking options and prices. It stood out to me as important when they said I did not come off as pushy for others to join the student-run organization I have thought of.
dear ciara, this video is well done and very expletive in what you will accomplish with your launch and product line. it was well thought out and clear. additionally, your confidence was well received alongside the strong and focused objectives. furthermore i would enjoy seeing you involve other people in helping you attain your primary goals.
I think your pitch was one that provided a great deal of information. The main issue that I see with the pitch is that it was slightly longer than the assignment outlined; we were aiming for very close to a minute and a half, and yours was just about two minutes. While this is definitely not an issue in many situations, as if you were talking to someone in real life you could always continue walking a little bit out of your way to finish what you have to say, it is also important for us to be able to be very close to what our given time constraint is in order to practice being an adaptable speaker. Still, I think your pitch was great!
dear ciara,
ReplyDeletethis video is well done and very expletive in what you will accomplish with your launch and product line. it was well thought out and clear. additionally, your confidence was well received alongside the strong and focused objectives. furthermore i would enjoy seeing you involve other people in helping you attain your primary goals.
Ciara,
ReplyDeleteI think your pitch was one that provided a great deal of information. The main issue that I see with the pitch is that it was slightly longer than the assignment outlined; we were aiming for very close to a minute and a half, and yours was just about two minutes. While this is definitely not an issue in many situations, as if you were talking to someone in real life you could always continue walking a little bit out of your way to finish what you have to say, it is also important for us to be able to be very close to what our given time constraint is in order to practice being an adaptable speaker. Still, I think your pitch was great!
Taeler